Che’Vaughn Bolden
Period 4
Endangered Animals of Hawaii
Hawaii’s species population has decreased
rapidly over the past couple of years.
There are 44 endangered animals out of 317 endangered species today this
year. Such as The Hawaiian Monk
Seal, Nene Bird, and Green Sea Turtle. Hawaii native species are becoming
extinct to the islands in which we live today.
According to National Geographic “The
Hawaiian Monk Seal is named for its folds of skin that somewhat resemble a
monk’s cowl, and because it is usually seen alone or in small groups”. The Hawaiian name for the monk seal is
“ ‘Ilio holo I ka uaua” which means, “dog that runs in rough water. “Like other species of warm water monk
seals, the Hawaiian monk seal has a tenuous grasp on survival”. Humans have moved into the locations
that monk seals frequented.
Hawaiian monk seals have also been a victim of fisheries. The biggest threat to Hawaiian monk
seals is tiger sharks. The sharks
prey on these monk seals. Because
of this many Hawaiian monk seals are endangered and even with protection
efforts we have, the population of this species is “believed to have fallen
more than ten percent per year since 1989”.
According to Sea Pics “The Nene Bird is endemic to the Hawaiian
Islands and the official bird of the State of Hawaii since 1957. It is the
world’s rarest goose with only around 1,000 living in the wild”. The Nene bird became rare and closely
extinct from hunting by Native Hawaiians, and introduction from predators, like
mongoose and cats by European Settlers.
According to Konica Minolta, “At one time, there were only 30 Nene Birds
in existence due to hunting and attack by other animals brought to the island”. Thos is a big difference in population
because there was once a sight throughout the Hawaiian Islands, that there was
a population reaching 25,000 birds in the 18th century. The decrease in population came from
immigrants from Europe arriving on the islands of Hawaii bringing cats and
mongoose.
According to National Geographic “Green
Sea Turtles are reptiles whose ancestors evolved on land and took to the sea to
live about 150 million years ago.
They are one of the few species so ancient that they watched the
dinosaurs evolve and become extinct”. The green sea turtle is named not for color of the
shell, but for the greenish color of their skin. The dangerous time for green sea turtles is when they make
their journey from their nest to the sea because of the multiple predators such
as, crabs and flocks of gulls, which prey on hatchlings. According to Conserve Turtles “The
population estimate of green sea turtles are 88,250 nesting females”.
In conclusion, Hawaii native species are
becoming extinct to the islands in which we live today. The very few endangered species of
Hawaii such as Hawaiian monk seal, green sea turtle, and the Nene bird are endangered and becoming
extinct from the cause of their predators which is humans, crabs, gulls, and
sharks. And this isn’t just a
little decrease in population; this is a major decrease such as from 25,000 to
30 Nene birds left. This issue is
important because the decrease in population of our species decreases our
lifestyles. For example, if the
fish in the sea decreased humans would have less fish to eat. So, the important
issue is that Hawaiian native species are becoming endangered and extinct and
humans need to do something about it.
You have a good sub-topic and your facts are great. It's just that you need to add you're opinion on how you feel about the monk seal, turtle, etc. You also need to work on your grammar and punctuation because some things you capitalized don't need to be. The introduction could be a little bit longer though.
ReplyDeleteI think you should stop stating "according to" since yes, its good that you have facts but its repetitive and boring. Your facts are good and extend your first and last paragraph
ReplyDeleteMAKE SURE THAT YOU FOLLOW THE CHUNKY PARAGRAPH FORMAT FOR EACH BODY PARAGRAPH. THERE SEEMS TO BE A LOT OF FACT BUT NOT ENOUGH OF YOUR OWN REASONING, YOUR REACTION/OPINION TO THE FACTS. ALSO AVOID REPEATING WORDS OR STATEMENTS. AS(2+)
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